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The chart describes the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in four major Western European Countries.

The chart describes the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in four major Western European Countries. BLjwV
The bar chart illustrates the information about how consumer spent money on different types of products in four European countries. Overall, it can be clearly seen that photographic film had the highest purchases in Britain while the lowest spending was tennis racquet in France. According to the chart, the largest amount of spending was photographic film in Britain by 175000 pounds approximately followed by spending on Toys in Britain and photographic in France at 170000 pounds and 165000 pounds respectively. Furthermore, there were stable amount of spending in Britain for personal stereos and tennis racquet at less than 160000 pounds and also for CDs and toys that remained equal at almost 160000 pounds. However, there was a static in the amount of customer buying in Italy on tennis racquet, Perfumes and CDs by 155000 pounds. Last but not least, it is particle noticeably in the smallest amount of customer purchasing tennis racquet in France at 145000 pounds
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types of products in four European countries.

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that photographic film had the highest
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purchases
in Britain while the lowest
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spending
was tennis racquet in France.

According to the chart, the largest
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of
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was photographic film in Britain by
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175000 pounds
approximately followed by
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spending
on Toys in Britain and photographic in France at
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170000 pounds
and
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165000 pounds
respectively
.

Furthermore
, there were stable
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amount
of
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spending
in Britain for personal stereos and tennis racquet at less than
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160000 pounds
and
also
for CDs and toys that remained equal at almost
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160000 pounds
.
However
, there was a static in the
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amount
of customer buying in Italy on tennis racquet, Perfumes and CDs by
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155000 pounds
.

Last
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not least, it is particle
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in the smallest
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amount
of customer purchasing tennis racquet in France at
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145000 pounds
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IELTS academic The chart describes the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in four major Western European Countries.

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