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Road maps to access the route of city hospital

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Two maps shows roadways to the city hospital of two different years which is 2007 and 2010. Its illustrates developments that took place in three years. In 2007, car parking of hospital staff and public were together but in 2010, public parking was separated in the east side, beside the city hospital. Before, bus stop were parallel to each other, three stops in west and three in east side. Later on a proper bus station was made in the west side. Two roundabouts were constructed on the ends of hospital road, which leads bus station. One roundabout connects ring road and the other connects city road. The hospital is surrounded by ring road underwent a very little whereas, majorities of the changes were made with two new roundabouts on hospital, parking and bus station.
Two maps
shows
roadways to the city
hospital
of two
different
years which is 2007 and 2010. Its illustrates developments that took place in three years.

In 2007, car parking of
hospital
staff and public were together
but
in 2010, public parking
was separated
in the east side, beside the city
hospital
.
Before
, bus
stop
were parallel to each other, three
stops
in west and three in east side. Later on a proper bus station
was made
in the west side. Two roundabouts
were constructed
on the ends of
hospital
road
, which leads bus station. One roundabout connects ring
road
and the other connects city
road
. The
hospital
is surrounded
by ring
road
underwent a
very
little
whereas, majorities of the
changes
were made
with two new roundabouts on
hospital
, parking and bus station.
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IELTS academic Road maps to access the route of city hospital

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  American English
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