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RESEARCH STUDENTS STUDYING 6 SCIENCE-RELATED SUBJECT AT uk UNIVERSITY IN 2009

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The bar chart shows the trend to choose a major of the student studying 6 science-related subject at a Bristish university in 2009 Overall, with Biology and Medicine major were the highest number of students while in Veterinary medicine major was the lowest As is observed from the given charts, the number of male students participate in voting more than the number of female students. The proportions of male students was much higher than the female students except Veterinary medicine. Biology was the choice of most of the students in both gender. In all subjects, In physic major that there is disparity between male and female highest, female account for about one fifth male. Besides, male students almost tend to choose the major of Biology, Physic and Medicine major, only differ by about 20 male students. As well as male students, Biology and Medicine were preferred subject by female students. In additons to the ratio of male students were the same in Astronomy and Geology major. As a general trend, the science was the career trends of male
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Bristish
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Biology
and
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Medicine
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major
were the highest number of
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students
while in Veterinary
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medicine
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major
was the lowest

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students
participate in voting more than the number of
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female
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students
. The proportions of male
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students
was much higher than the
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female
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students
except Veterinary
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medicine
.
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Biology
was the choice of most of the
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students
in both gender.

In all subjects, In physic
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major
that there is disparity between male and
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female
highest,
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female
account for about one fifth male.
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students
almost tend to choose the
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Biology
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Medicine
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additons
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were the same in Astronomy and Geology major.

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