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The graph illustrates the reasons why people migrated the capital city of a particular country over 15-year period from 2000 to 2015. Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in the number of people move to the capital city of a particular country by all the reason examined, with the study witnessing the most dramatic rise. However, the employment was seen the most popular reason throughout the survey period. In 2000 the number of people migrated by the employment start at 60000 people, after which it increased moderately and reach a peak of 90000 people in 2010. Finally, it decreased slightly to about 87000 people in 2015. Although the figure for people migrated by the study stared less than the employment, then it experienced significant increase and reach a level equal to the employment in 2015. On other hand, a number of people move to the capital move due to the fact of the family and the adventure was quite low, only about 10. 000 people. During the 15-year period, it was increased slight, to reached 10000 and 20000 people respectively in 2015.
The graph illustrates the reasons why
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people
migrated the capital city of a particular country over 15-year period from 2000 to 2015.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there was an increase in the number of
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people
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move
to the capital city of a particular country by all the reason examined, with the study witnessing the most dramatic rise.
However
, the
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employment
was
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seen
the most popular reason throughout the survey period.

In 2000 the number of
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people
migrated by the
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employment
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start
at 60000
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people
, after which it increased
moderately
and reach a peak of 90000
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people
in 2010.
Finally
, it decreased
slightly
to about 87000
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people
in 2015. Although the figure for
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people
migrated by the study stared less than the
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employment
, then it experienced significant increase and reach a level equal to the
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employment
in 2015.

On other hand, a number of
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people
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move
to the capital
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move
due to the fact of the family and the adventure was quite low,
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only
about 10. 000
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people
. During the 15-year period, it
was increased
slight, to reached 10000 and 20000
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people
respectively
in 2015.
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IELTS academic report the reason move to the capital city of a particular country

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  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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