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the data provided in these pie charts compare alternative sources used by peoples living in Canada and Australia to access news. these charts consist of sources like- tv, radio and printers, overall, half of Canadians used tv as a major tool to watch the news. in comparison, more than half of Australians choose to use the internet as a prominent way to listen to the news. figuratively, tv has a nearly similar ratio. Canadian don't prefer the internet for news as much as Australians, although people reading printed news in Canada is SIGNIFICANTLY more than in Australia: whereas Canada has 3 % sources which are not specified and Australia also has 2% of unspecific sources.
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IELTS academic report the pie chart. describe key features

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