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The graph below gives information about new doctor's salaries?

The graph below gives information about new doctor's salaries? paD3w
This report derives from the line graph which illustrates the average salary in dollars earned by a new doctor over three decades, from 1985 until 2015. It is very clear from the graph that, the average initial salary of a women doctor always lower than a male doctor. In addition to this point, it is also clear that both men and women doctor's beginning salary increased over the decade. A specific analysis reveals that, in 1985 the average salary of a female doctor was around 100, 000 but, at the same time the salary of a male doctor reached 150000. In a like manner to the previous analysis, the difference in salary on the basis of gender start declining between 1985 and 2005. After 2015, the gender based salary gap again started to grow. During the same time period men doctors salary had seen a sudden increase. In general, that graph shows that a new doctors salary almost doubled in last 30 years regardless of their age.
This report derives from the line graph which illustrates the average
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salary
in dollars earned by a new
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doctor
over three decades, from 1985 until 2015.

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clear
from the graph that, the average initial
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salary
of
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a women
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lower than a male
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.
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that both
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men
and women doctor's beginning
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increased over the decade.

A specific analysis reveals that, in 1985 the average
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of a female
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doctor
was around 100, 000
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, at the same time the
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of a male
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doctor
reached 150000.
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to the previous analysis, the difference in
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on the basis of gender
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start
declining between 1985 and 2005. After 2015, the gender based
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gap again
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started
to grow. During the same time period
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men
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doctors
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had
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a sudden increase.

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, that graph
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that a new
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almost doubled in last 30 years regardless of their age.
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