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how people in your family share housework

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My family is a nuclear family including my parents, me and my younger brother. We are all busy people: both of my parents do the white-collar job, I and my brother spend most of our time on schoolwork, so we split the household chores equally. My dad is responsible for the labors such as doing weight-lifting, mending things around the house and sometimes cleaning the house. My mum does most of the cooking and grocery shopping. Being the elder child in the family, I take up a large share of housework. I do the washing up, lay the table for meals and do the laundry. My brother has to sweep the floor, water the plants and do the washing-up. We enjoy doing the household chores together since we all know that it’s not anyone’s duty but all, and splitting the chores equally also helps to create a positive atmosphere for the family, too.
My
family
is a nuclear
family
including my parents, me and my younger brother. We are all busy
people
: both of my parents do the white-collar job, I and my brother spend most of our time on schoolwork,
so
we split the household chores
equally
. My dad is responsible for the labors such as doing weight-lifting, mending things around the
house
and
sometimes
cleaning the
house
. My mum does most of the cooking and grocery shopping. Being the elder child in the
family
, I take up a large share of housework. I do the washing up, lay the table for meals and do the laundry. My brother
has to
sweep the floor, water the plants and do the washing-up. We enjoy doing the household chores together since we all know that it’s not anyone’s duty
but
all, and splitting the chores
equally
also
helps
to create a
positive
atmosphere for the
family
, too.
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IELTS academic how people in your family share housework

Academic
  American English
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153 words
6.0
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