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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals of the yearly number of rents and sales of movies from a special market from 2002 to 2011. Overall, the past decade has witnessed a dramatically drop in rental figures and a complex change for sales numbers. In the beginning year of 2002, film rentals ranked the highest at a number of 180, 000 but declined beyond 70, 000 in 2011. Sales numbers of VHS also followed a similar trend with its best value at around 80, 000 in 2002 and dropped to zero in 2006. As for other film sales, there was a considerable growing trend of DVD sales starting from 2002, with a sales number less than 50, 000, reaching a peak number over 210, 000 in 2007. At the same year, Blu-ray products were exposed to the market and gained popularity by years, which resulted in a steady decrease in DVD sales between 2007 and 2011.

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 of movies from a special market from 2002 to 2011. Overall
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Sales
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numbers
 of VHS also
 followed a similar trend with its best value at around 80, 000 in 2002 and dropped to zero in 2006.

As for other film You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
, there was a considerable growing trend of DVD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 starting from 2002, with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
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number
 less than 50, 000, reaching a peak You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 over 210, 000 in 2007. At the same year, Blu-ray products were exposed
 to the market and gained popularity by years, which resulted in a steady decrease in DVD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 between 2007 and 2011. 