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The graph bellow shows the quantities of good transported

The graph bellow shows the quantities of good transported Ol3dj
the graph show quantities of goods transported by four different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002. overall, I can see between 1974 and 2002 tend to increase, nevertheless proportion to rise differently. firstly, the road from 60 to 100 milion tomes this proves that it's to rise very fast. however 3 transport difference are less developed, the water road between 1982 and 1998 to surge and the contunied to growth, rail road remain stable while the pieline don't have any change. in conclusion, the road is the most used, the pipeline used at least
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quantities of
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transported by four
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modes of transport from 1974 to 2002.
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overall
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between 1974 and 2002 tend to increase,
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proportion to rise
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firstly
, the
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from 60 to 100
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milion
tomes this proves that it's to rise
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.
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however
3 transport difference are less developed, the water
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road
between 1982 and 1998 to surge and the
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contunied
to growth, rail
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remain stable while the
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pieline
don't have any
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change
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conclusion, the
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is the most
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, the pipeline
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IELTS academic The graph bellow shows the quantities of good transported

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