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Renovations for South West Airport Map

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The Map details the plans for the renovation in the next year of South West Airport. Looking from an overall perspective, it is steadily apparent that the number of gates will greatly expand and a variety of customer-facing facilities will be added including shops, car hire and an ATM. The locations of Departures and Arrivals remain same but the future plan projects that there will be additional doors. Upon entering the Airport, currently there is a single check-in and cafe but the future plan shows that the Check-in will be moved from left side to the right side of the departures to make a room for bag drop area and repositioning the cafe. Arrivals will be affix with a cafe, ATM and a carhire to add the necessities by extending the building. Security Passport Control and Customs remain unchanged but future plan shows shops immediately upon exiting the security services. The largest proposed alterations for the airport is replacing the walkway with Sky train track and constructing 2 corridors for enabling the flyers to reach more than twice(8 gates at present and 18 after renovations. )
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for the renovation in the
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year of South West Airport. Looking from an
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perspective, it is
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apparent that the number of gates will
greatly
expand and a variety of customer-facing facilities will be
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including shops, car hire and an ATM. The locations of Departures and Arrivals remain same
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the future
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projects that there will be additional doors. Upon entering the Airport,
currently
there is a single
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-in and
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that the
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-in will be
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side to the right side of the departures to
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a room for bag drop area and repositioning the
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cafe
. Arrivals will be
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the necessities by extending the building. Security Passport Control and Customs remain unchanged
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shops immediately upon exiting the security services. The largest proposed alterations for the airport is replacing the walkway with Sky train
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and constructing 2 corridors for enabling the flyers to reach more than twice(8 gates at present and 18 after renovations.
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