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Given in the bar chart is data on how much coffee was harvested in four different countries within a timespan of 3 years commencing in 2011.

Given in the bar chart is data on how much coffee was harvested in four different countries within a timespan of 3 years commencing in 2011. kear8
Given in the bar chart is data on how much coffee was harvested in four different countries within a timespan of 3 years commencing in 2011. As can be inferred from the chart, while coffee yields in Brazil and Vietnam fluctuated, coffee production in Indo and Colom reflected an upward progression. Another key feature is that Brazil was the most coffee-harvesting out of the countries examined. At the outset of the period, the amount of coffee produced in Indo registered about 9 million units. This figure rose to north of 11 million units by 2013. A similar upward trend was seen in the Colombian production of coffee, climbing from 8 million units to shy of 11 million units throughout the period. In 2011, Brazil recorded approximately 45 million units in its coffee production. The period examined displayed a rise in this figure to about 51 million in 2012 before declining by nearly 2 million units until 2013. Another fluctuation, albeit in reverse order, was reported in the coffee yields of Vietnam, with figures initially dwindling by 2 million units before reaching 28 million by the end.
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yields in Brazil and Vietnam fluctuated,
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production in
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reflected an upward progression. Another key feature is that Brazil was the most coffee-harvesting out of the countries examined.

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registered about 9
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. This figure rose to north of 11
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by 2013. A similar upward trend was
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, climbing from 8
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to shy of 11
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throughout the period.

In 2011, Brazil recorded approximately 45
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in its
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production. The period examined displayed a rise in this figure to about 51
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in 2012
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until 2013. Another fluctuation, albeit in reverse order,
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yields of Vietnam, with figures
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IELTS academic Given in the bar chart is data on how much coffee was harvested in four different countries within a timespan of 3 years commencing in 2011.

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