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Reasons why adults decide to study

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The bar graph provides data about the of the reasons affecting an adult’s decision to pursue education. Overall, a significant proportion of adults affirmed that interest in the subject and opportunity to gain qualifications influenced their decision to study, while meeting people has the least impact in this matter. While 40% of the adults continue learning mainly due to their interest in the subject, there are 2% lesser who think that studying will let them acquire further qualifications. As for those who are currently employed, they decided to continue in their studies to consequently help them perform their jobs. Exactly a fifth of the adult students pursue education to develop their prospects for promotion whereas another 20% partake in this endeavor plainly because they enjoy learning. There are also adults who study to be able to have an alternative job which is 3% higher than those who wanted to meet other people cited at 9%.

The bar graph provides data about the of the reasons affecting an adult’s decision to pursue education.

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