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reasons for travel and main issues for the travelling public

reasons for travel and main issues for the travelling public alnym
The given chart illustrates motives for why people travel, while the pie chart reflects on itself the major problems for the travelling public. It is obviously seen that public mainly travel for commuting to work. Additionally, the cost of the travel is one of the main matters which individuals are facing during to get about to another place. According to the bar chart, travel for commuting to the work is the highest percentage of trips which it is 49%, while the point for the purpose of visiting friends or relatives is accounted as the lowest indicator, at 6%. People who travel for their personal reason are consisted of only 19% whereas for shopping and social/recreation are calculated only 16% and 10 % respectively. Looking at the main matters related to travels which are shown by pie chart, it is clear that with 36 % proportion, concerns regarding the cost of the travel take the priority over other issues. But in contrast, issues about space for footpassengers take only 6% of pie chart as a lowest measure. Precisely, measure variation between safety concerns, aggressive drivers and highway congestion differs by 2%, 3 % respectively
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illustrates motives for why
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people
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, while the pie
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reflects on itself the major problems for the travelling public.

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obviously
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seen
that public
mainly
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for commuting to work.
Additionally
, the cost of the
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is one of the main matters which individuals are facing during to
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get
about to another place.

According to the bar
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,
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for commuting to the work is the highest percentage of trips which it is 49%, while the point for the purpose of visiting friends or relatives
is accounted
as the lowest indicator, at 6%.
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People
who
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travel
for their personal reason
are consisted
of
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only
19% whereas for shopping and social/recreation
are calculated
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only
16% and 10 %
respectively
.

Looking at the main matters related to
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travels
which
are shown
by pie
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, it is
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that with 36 % proportion, concerns regarding the cost of the
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travel
take the priority over other issues.
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, issues about space for
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footpassengers
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6% of pie
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as
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a
lowest measure.
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, measure variation between safety concerns, aggressive drivers and highway congestion differs by 2%, 3 %
respectively

IELTS academic reasons for travel and main issues for the travelling public

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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