Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

changes in the school in 2024

changes in the school in 2024 QRNV3
The first diagram shows a map of a school site in 2004, however the other one shows the planned changes of the same site school in 2024. In Overall view, the planned features show a new road, car park, more students to be admitted and changes in the sports field location. The planned future of the school site, include a road which is made in the middle of the site separating the garden, from the actual school, furthermore, there is a new car park which is in the north. There was a path that was used to combine the sports field with the main entrance, however in the future this pass will be cut, and a new building will be constructed instead in the sports field area, thus a pass will be made from this new building to the other buildings, more over, the initial 2 building are now combines to each others. The size of the sports field is decreased, and will be moved into the garden site. On the other hand the 2 maps show the same old road, car park, and main entrance, there are no changes in the building's sizes, nor tree cutting was performed.
The
first
diagram
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shows
a map of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
in 2004,
however
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shows
the planned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
of the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
in 2024. In
Overall
view, the planned features
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
road, car park, more students to
be admitted
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
location.

The planned future of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
, include a road which
is made
in the middle of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
separating the garden, from the actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
,
furthermore
, there is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
car park which is in the north. There was a path that was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to combine the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
with the main entrance,
however
in the future this pass will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
, and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
will
be constructed
instead
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
area,
thus
a pass will
be made
from this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
, more over, the initial 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
combines to each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "other"?
others
. The size of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
is decreased
, and will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
into the garden site.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand the 2 maps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
the same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
road, car park, and main entrance, there are no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the building's sizes, nor tree cutting
was performed
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic changes in the school in 2024

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
    The bar graph shows the export earnings of a country under various categories between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it can be observed from the bar graph that engineered goods and petroleum products are the highest exported articles in both the years. In 2015, the export of petroleum products was highest...
  • 5.5band
    wastes treatment in 2 different countries
    The given pie charts show the percentage recycling, Incineration, underground burry, chemical treatment, and sea dumping done in 3 different countries including Republic of Korea, Sweden, and UK. In over all view, underground burying is done in all 3 countries, and hugely practiced in the UK, howeve...
  • 6.5band
    The two maps compare the change of a community center in the past and present.
    Presented are two maps depicting the change in the layout of a community center from the past to now. As transparent from the maps, the function of the facility is simplified with a number of areas being demolished and erected. In the past, the community center could be reached by the entrance in ...
  • 6band
    developments in Raymond Village
    The diagrams illustrate the developments that have taken place in Raymond Village over the last 26 years. As an overall perspective, residential areas are expanded in the north-west and south of the village. In addition, in the north-east a majority of lands have altered into recreational areas. Som...
  • 5band
    The graph shows the happiness quortien of people in three metros of the country
    The given bar graph depicts the information about happiness quatient of individuals in three different railways of nation. the vertical side shows number of people and horizontal side, three different computation After analysing, it is clearly seen that family had most happiness in three quatient in...
  • 6.5band
    means of transport in australia
    The table indicates how the registration of five means of transport in Australia changed between 2010 and 2014. Overall, all methods of transport experienced increases over the period surveyed. Another notable feature is that motorcycles had faster growth than any other kind of vehicle. In 2010, t...





Get more results for topic:
  • changes in the school in 2024