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Rating car's features importance

Rating car's features importance Qwkoy
This bar chart shows me about rating car features in my opinion and my class. Overall, all my class care about safety so they choose the airbag as the most important aspect when buying a car. In my opinion, the most essential item when buying a vehicle is the airbag. If I buy a car, the second most important feature will be the stereo system. The third most significant feature when choosing a car for me is the alarm. A little more crucial when I buy a car than the sun roof is the colour. The least important item in my view when selecting a vehicle is the sun roof. Same to me, the most remarkable item when buying a vehicle in my class is the airbag. The second most important feature when buying a car over my class is the color. Then, the third most essential feature when choosing a vehicle in my class is the air conditioning. The least important item when selecting a vehicle for my class is the sun roof. A little more significant when they buy a car than the stereo system is the alarm.
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for me is the alarm. A
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IELTS academic Rating car's features importance

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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