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The 2 bar chart represents total amount of computer holders as a percentage and owner of computer by education class respectively for an eight-year period. Overall, the number of computers owned slightly increased from 2002 to 2010. In the same manner, computer ownership vs education level also saw an upward trend. In the beginning for computer ownership, for the eight years, the trend for keeping a computer started and consequently, after every two years, a slight growth is seen. As a result of this, from 2002 to 2010, computer ownership growth was increased by approximately twenty-five percent. On the same note, comparing education level by ownership, as the latter saw growth, so does the former. For school and college going children, computer ownership is ahead by almost fifty percent for years 2002 to 2010. Although, for degree holders and post-graduate students, the number of computer owned definitely grew but very slightly. For these two categories, the gradual increase was recorded as twenty percent.

The 2 bar chart represents total amount of computer holders as a percentage and owner of computer by education This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
respectively
 for an eight-year period.

Overall
, the number of computers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
slightly
 increased from 2002 to 2010. In the same manner, computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
 vs education level also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 an upward trend.

In the beginning for computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
, for the eight years, the trend for keeping a computer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 and consequently
, after every two years, a slight growth is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. As a result
 of this, from 2002 to 2010, computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
 growth was increased
 by approximately twenty-five percent.

On the same note, comparing education level by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
, as the latter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 growth, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 does the former. For school and college going children, computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
 is ahead by almost fifty percent for years 2002 to 2010. Although, for degree holders and post-graduate students, the number of computer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 definitely grew This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
slightly
. For these two categories, the gradual increase was recorded
 as twenty percent. 