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Rainwater Collection from Homes

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The diagram how rainwater is collected and processed from each home in an Australian town. As rainwater falls on the rooftops, it collects in a gutter then eventually goes down the pipe at the side of the house to the drain at the bottom. Each house collects rainwater this way and the rainwater is then passed along underground drains to the water filter. In the water filtration process, gross impurities are removed, and the filtrate collects into another storage tank. From the storage tank, the water proceeds to the treatment tank, where it is purified chemically. After chemical treatment, the water becomes fit for consumption and is channeled up through the pipes to individual houses. Drinking water then flows from the faucets.
The diagram how
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rainwater
is collected
and processed from each home in an Australian town. As
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rainwater
falls on the rooftops, it collects in a gutter then
eventually
goes down the pipe at the side of the
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house
to the drain at the bottom. Each
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house
collects
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rainwater
this way and the
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rainwater
is then passed along underground drains to the
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water
filter.

In the
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water
filtration process, gross impurities
are removed
, and the filtrate collects into another storage tank. From the storage tank, the
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water
proceeds to the treatment tank, where it
is purified
chemically
.

After chemical treatment, the
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water
becomes fit for consumption and
is channeled
up through the pipes to individual
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houses
. Drinking
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water
then flows from the faucets.
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IELTS academic Rainwater Collection from Homes

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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