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Question 2 You are a member at a local gym. The owners of the gym have recently bought more property in order to expand the facility. They are asking their members whether they should build a tennis court or a swimming pool. Which option do you prefer? Explain your choice? Option A: Tennis court Option B: Swimming pool

Question 2 You are a member at a local gym. The owners of the gym have recently bought more property in order to expand the facility. They are asking their members whether they should build a tennis court or a swimming pool. Which option do you prefer? Explain your choice? Option A: Tennis court Option B: Swimming pool xORlg

I personally believe that the extra space shall be utilized for building a swimming pool. Even though people love playing table tennis, having a swim area will make them relax and spend time socializing with other gym members. Constructing a swimming pool will give time to relax after sweaty workout sessions. This is because cool water calms our nerves and can be refreshing for some. More specifically, it will be rejuvenating to enjoy swimming on the top floor when the vicinity of the gym is surrounded by beautiful mountains and lustrous green plants. Another reason why I think the swimming pool could be a better choice is that it will help members to know more about each other. We all have busy schedules wherein we don't get time to socialize outside our daily routine. The activity of gym will become more interesting when swimming will help us to know more about each other and spend some quality time rather than hanging out at a different place. Considering the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly feel that building a swimming pool would be a better choice. However, these are my personal beliefs, and I am willing to agree on whatever the owners decide. I appreciate the opportunity to put my thought on this issue.

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