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The maps show the hunderstone two in present and proposed plan for it.

The maps show the hunderstone two in present and proposed plan for it. web5E
Overall it can be clearly seen that the major changes are predicted in the west side of the down. West side of the down. Interstingly the most significant changes would be addition of one more roundabout area. To begin with Airfield area in north-west cornor of the two is explained to be converted into industrial area which is expected to connect Railway station. Furthermore roundabout portion and A2 road in the west side area of the down are assumed to be kept into a A4 road is planned to introduced with the purpose of joining A2. Not only this but the newly built A4 road is projected to join. Town center of the east side to the west side of the town. In addition one exclusive roundabout area is predicted to be introduced in the center of the down, Which has aim to joining whole town but the gas station in the middle of the town is estimated to be remain unchanged. Finally Railway station build up area and town center are estimated to be unchanged. Nevertheless the town center is plannedto be joined constructing one road.
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that the major
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changes
are predicted
in the west side of the
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down
. West side of the
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down
.
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Interstingly
the most significant
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changes
would be addition of one more roundabout area.

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begin
with Airfield
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area
in north-west
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cornor
of the two is
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explained
to
be converted
into industrial
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area
which is
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expected
to connect Railway station.
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Furthermore
roundabout portion and A2
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road
in the west side
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area
of the
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down
are assumed
to be
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kept
into a A4
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road
is planned
to introduced with the purpose of joining A2. Not
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only
this
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the
newly
built A4
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road
is projected
to
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join
.
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Town
center of the east side to the west side of the town.

In
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addition
one exclusive roundabout
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area
is predicted
to
be introduced
in the center of the
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down
, Which has aim to joining whole
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town
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but
the gas station in the middle of the
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town
is estimated
to be
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remain
unchanged.
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Finally
Railway station build up
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and
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town
center
are estimated
to
be unchanged
.
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center is
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plannedto
be
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joined
constructing one
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IELTS academic The maps show the hunderstone two in present and proposed plan for it.

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