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Changes of an Island after Being Constructed for Tourism

Changes of an Island after Being Constructed for Tourism GJXVg

The map on the left demonstrates the changes of an island after being constructed for tourism. The most noticeable difference is the tourist facility. There is a restaurant, a reception center, and fifteen accommodations now, and those facilities are mainly built in the central part and the southwest part of the island. In the south of the island, a plat is set between two newly planted trees. To the west of the island, a swimming area is prepared for people resting on the beach to have fun in. Then comes the footpath and vehicle tracking. There are footpaths radiated from every accommodation. Between the plat and the restaurant, the vehicle track stops at the front door of the reception center then restarts from the back of it. Something remains the same. Twelve palm trees still scatter at the island. Three of them are to the west of the reception center. The other nine are standing in the ease of this island.

The map on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 demonstrates the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 after being constructed
 for tourism.

The most noticeable difference is the tourist facility. There is a restaurant, a reception center, and fifteen accommodations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, and those facilities are mainly
 built in the central part and the southwest part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. In the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, a plat is set
 between two newly
 planted trees. To the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, a swimming area is prepared
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 resting on the beach to have fun in.

Then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 the footpath and vehicle tracking. There are footpaths radiated from every accommodation. Between the plat and the restaurant, the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 at the front door of the reception center then restarts from the back of it.

Something remains the same. Twelve palm trees still
 scatter at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Three of them are to the west of the reception center. The other nine are standing in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. 