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Provided maps illustrate the information on how the city of Eastminster changed over 10 years between 1999 and 2009.

Provided maps illustrate the information on how the city of Eastminster changed over 10 years between 1999 and 2009. 7a0p5
Provided maps illustrate the information on how the city of Eastminster changed over 10 years between 1999 and 2009. The city has a river crossing in the middle of it, separating the city into two parts, and there is a railway station in the south-west of the city and the railway itself passes through the southern part of the city parallel to the river. Over the given time phase, the city was completely transformed with the removal of the large house with gardens, decreased area of the park, in favor of new house and Hotel with golf course. One of the biggest changes in the city, through this period, seems to be the construction of new Factories amd warehouses which were built in the southern parts of the city. Second largest change can be considered a great increase in the number of houses in the city as the number of houses in the north bank doubled and in the place of Public gardens some new houses were built next to the aparment blocks, which replaced the Street of houses. The other change to be mentioned is minimized number of trees in the Woodland which was because of the construction of a new adventure park. School was relocated from the south bank to the north bank of the river and a new shopping complex was built in the previous are of school between the hospital and shops, which stayed untouched within the given time-frame.
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The city has a river crossing in the middle of it, separating the city into two parts, and there is a railway station in the south-west of the city and the railway itself passes through the southern part of the city parallel to the river. Over the
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time phase, the city was completely transformed with the removal of the large
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with gardens, decreased area of the park, in favor of
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and Hotel with golf course.

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Factories
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in the city as the number of
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in the north bank doubled and in the place of Public gardens
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number of trees in the Woodland which was
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adventure park. School
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from the south bank to the north bank of the river and a
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shopping complex
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IELTS academic Provided maps illustrate the information on how the city of Eastminster changed over 10 years between 1999 and 2009.

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