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The maps depict current structures of Islip town center and future look after planned developments are applied.

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The two pie charts illustrate the energy usage of an average household and greenhouse gas emission from this usage, in Australia. Units are in percentage and there are six categories; namely heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances. Overall, energy consumption caused by heating is the highest, but heating water releases the most greenhouse gas. The cooling processes are the lowest for both of these parameters. When examined closely, energy cost of heating is 42% of the total energy used, followed by water heating, which is at 30%. Energy consumed by cooling and lighting are significantly lower than other categories, at 2% and 4%, respectively. On the other hand, greenhouse gas emission caused by water heating is %32 of the total. With the addition of heating and cooling, they released a half of all the greenhouse gas. The emisson of other appliances is placed second at 28% of the total. Finally, cooling is the lowest greenhouse releaser, at 3% of the overall gas emisson.
The two pie charts illustrate the
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usage of an average household and
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greenhouse
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gas
emission from this usage, in Australia. Units are in percentage and there are six categories;
namely
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heating
,
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water
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heating
, refrigeration,
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, lighting and
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appliances.

Overall
,
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consumption caused by
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heating
is the highest,
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releases the most
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gas
. The
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processes are the lowest for both of these parameters.

When examined
closely
,
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cost of
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heating
is 42% of the total
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, which is at 30%.
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and lighting are
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categories, at 2% and 4%,
respectively
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On the
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hand,
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greenhouse
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emission caused by
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water
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is %32 of the total. With the addition of
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and
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, they released a half of all the
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. The
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of
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Finally
,
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is the lowest
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releaser, at 3% of the
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IELTS academic The maps depict current structures of Islip town center and future look after planned developments are applied.

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4 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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