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The diagram illustrates how to manufacture ceramic pots. Overall, it can be easily seen that there are 4 main stages in the manufacturing of ceramic pots, beginning with collecting the raw materials and delivering them to the factory and ending with colour firing in an oven.

The diagram illustrates how to manufacture ceramic pots. Overall, it can be easily seen that there are 4 main stages in the manufacturing of ceramic pots, beginning with collecting the raw materials and delivering them to the factory and ending with colour firing in an oven. lLG99
The diagram illustrates how to manufacture ceramic pots. Overall, it can be easily seen that there are 4 main stages in the manufacturing of ceramic pots, beginning with collecting the raw materials and delivering them to the factory and ending with colour firing in an oven. The process commences when raw materials (soil, sand, …) are dug by excavators and delivered to the factory on trucks. In the next stage, they are crushed by a construction machine called crasher, then the mixture including them and water is put in moulds to form a pot shape. After drying 4-6 days, clay (đất sét) pots (lọ, nồi) are taken out. The next stage is assembled clay pots in a 1000 degree Celsius oven. Following that, they are covered a colour layer and baked (nung) again. Eventually, finished pots called ceramic pots are delivered to retail shops or end users on trucks.
The diagram illustrates how to manufacture ceramic pots.

Overall
, it can be
easily
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seen
that there are 4 main stages in the manufacturing of ceramic
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pots
, beginning with collecting the raw materials and delivering them to the factory and ending with
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colour
firing in an oven.

The process commences when raw materials (soil, sand, …)
are dug
by excavators and delivered to the factory on trucks. In the
next
stage, they
are crushed
by a construction machine called
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crasher
, then the mixture including them and water
is put
in
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moulds
to form a
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pot
shape. After drying 4-6 days, clay (
Possible spelling mistake found.
đất
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sét
)
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pots
(
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lọ
,
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nồi
)
are taken
out.

The
next
stage
is assembled
clay
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pots
in a 1000 degree Celsius oven. Following that, they
are covered
a
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colour
layer and baked (
Possible spelling mistake found.
nung
) again.
Eventually
, finished
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pots
called ceramic
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pots
are delivered
to retail shops or
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end
users on trucks.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how to manufacture ceramic pots. Overall, it can be easily seen that there are 4 main stages in the manufacturing of ceramic pots, beginning with collecting the raw materials and delivering them to the factory and ending with colour firing in an oven.

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