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Produced cotton and wheet in Tashkent

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The given line graph compares the ratio of manufactured of agricultural product in capital of Uzbekistan given time frame Overall, It is reveal from the initial glance at the line graph that the most produced product was wheet in 2015Firstly, in the beginning of the period the number of produced cotton was the highest throughout the given milestone in 1995 to 40000 tone and that year the lower indication belonging wheet 10000. The next few decades saw a cotton substantially plunged 2010 wheet was fluctuation until 2005. Till 2010 wheet sharply escalated to 50000 but next five years moderately dropped to 30000. Between 2005 and 2010 fabricated cotton slightly soared circa 40 thousand in 2015 cotton was significantly decreased about zero tone
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line graph compares the ratio of manufactured of agricultural product in capital of Uzbekistan
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, in the beginning of the period the number of produced cotton was the highest throughout the
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was fluctuation until 2005. Till 2010
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five years
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dropped to 30000. Between 2005 and 2010 fabricated cotton
slightly
soared circa 40 thousand in 2015 cotton was
significantly
decreased about zero
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IELTS academic Produced cotton and wheet in Tashkent

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