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Process of making potato chips

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The picture illustrates how to produce potato chips. As can be clearly seen from the diagram, potato chips production consists of 11 main stages, beginning with raw potatoes and finishing when final products are ready to be transported. To begin with, potatoes are sorted to identify which are suitable before being put into a washer to be clean and ready for the next steps. After that they are transferred to a peeler to remove the outer skin, following that the peeled potatoes are sliced into many thin pieces. To the next steps, first, the pieces are consequently blanched by boiling water before being dried by the heat. The following step is frying all of these potato pieces. After having done frying, the slices are spiced with some flavors. When finishing all the cooking stages, potatoes are packed and put in storages. Finally, stored potato chips are ready to be carried to other locations for consumption.

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potato
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potatoes
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.

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