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Process Diagram, The process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building history.

Process Diagram, The process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building history. JVe9j
The above process diagram depicts how the bricks are made, which is mostly used during the construction. Brick manufacturing process should be start within the area where the clay can be found. The machine nammed digger which is look similar like jcb machine, is used for digging the clay from the land, which can be of any type like wet clay or dry clay. The digged clay is going further for process of cleaning, in which the clay is poured out on a roller by the metal grid. The roller differetiate the sand from the clay. After the differentiation process of clay and sand, it creates the mixture of a sand and water. this mixture is poured within the mould which is rectangle in shape. Thereafter, it is cutted down by the wire cutter which forms the sand in the bricks form. The brick then after goes for the drying oven for around 1 to 2 days to get dried. After drying completion, the brick pass out from other three phases where the temparature goes around 200 degree celcius to 980 degree celcius, in other word this kind of temprature known as moderate tempratue. Similar like this with diffrent temperature of around 870 degree celcius to 1300 degree celcius of high temperatue from which the brick is passed. Furthermore in process, it takes around 3 days in a cooling chember for brick to get the cool down fom a very high temprature. Aftre completly getting cooled, brick goes for a packaging process, which is the necessary thing for the delivery of it.
The above
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process
diagram depicts how the
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bricks
are made
, which is
mostly
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used
during the construction.

Brick manufacturing
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process
should be
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start
within the area where the
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clay
can
be found
. The machine
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nammed
digger which is look similar like
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jcb
machine, is
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used
for digging the
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clay
from the land, which can be of any type like wet
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clay
or dry
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clay
. The
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digged
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clay
is going
further
for
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process
of cleaning, in which the
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clay
is poured
out on a roller by the metal grid.
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The
roller
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differetiate
the
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sand
from the
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clay
. After the differentiation
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process
of
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clay
and
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sand
, it creates the mixture of a
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sand
and water.
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this
mixture
is poured
within the
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mould
which is rectangle in shape. Thereafter, it is
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cutted
down by the wire cutter which forms the
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sand
in the
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bricks
form. The
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brick
then after goes for the drying oven for
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around
1 to 2 days to
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get
dried. After drying completion, the
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brick
pass out from other three phases where the
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temparature
goes
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around
200
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degree
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celcius
to 980
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degree
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celcius
, in other word this kind of
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temprature
known as moderate
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tempratue
. Similar like this with
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diffrent
temperature of
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around
870
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degree
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celcius
to 1300
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degree
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celcius
of high
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temperatue
from which the
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brick
is passed
.
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Furthermore
in
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process
, it takes
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around
3 days in a cooling
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chember
for
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brick
to
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get
the cool down
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fom
a
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very
high
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temprature
.
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Aftre
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completly
getting cooled,
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brick
goes for a packaging
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process
, which is the necessary thing for the delivery of it.
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IELTS academic Process Diagram, The process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building history.

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