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Prevent floodings in different areas

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This diagram shows useful information about how to prevent houses from getting reached by floodings in areas exposed to this issue. According to the first part, stopbanks would be an option to avoing floodings. They have a freeboard, which is the space between the peak of the stopbank, before the water gets into the area. The location of the house is between this stopbank and another mountain which can cause rain to accumulate either. Thereby, houses should be built with colums that raise them from the ground, so the water would have enough space to flow without affecting the construction. The second diagram shows houses built without a stopbank. This could allow water to flow intro a river or drain so the water level could decrease rapidly as it doesn't get stuck. It's important to take into consideration the heigh of the house, so in this case it should have taller colums that separates it from the ground.
This diagram
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useful information about how to
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prevent
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houses
from getting reached by
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floodings
in areas exposed to this issue.

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first
part,
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stopbanks
would be an option to
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avoing
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floodings
. They have a freeboard, which is the space between the peak of the
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stopbank
,
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before
the
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water
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gets
into the area. The location of the
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house
is between this
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stopbank
and another mountain which can cause rain to accumulate either. Thereby,
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houses
should
be built
with
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colums
that raise them from the ground,
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so
the
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water
would have
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enough
space to flow without affecting the construction.

The second diagram
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houses
built without a
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stopbank
. This could
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allow
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water
to flow intro a river or drain
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so
the
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water
level could decrease
rapidly
as it doesn't
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get
stuck. It's
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important
to take into consideration the
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heigh
of the
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house
,
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so
in this case
it should have taller
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colums
that separates it from the ground.

IELTS academic Prevent floodings in different areas

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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