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presents the national exports profit (in billions dollar) of varied sectors between2015 and 2016 while the table shows the comparison of percentage in different categoriesover the same period.

presents the national exports profit (in billions dollar) of varied sectors between2015 and 2016 while the table shows the comparison of percentage in different categoriesover the same period. n1NMe
The chart presents the national exports profit (in billions dollar) of varied sectors between2015 and 2016 while the table shows the comparison of percentage in different categoriesover the same period. In the chart, looking minutely, all fields witnessed a modest increase in the income exceptgems and jewellery. Despite starting at a lower point at below 60 billion dollars comparingwith petroleum products in 2015, engineered goods have marginally risen to the sameplacement as its counterpart at practically 62 billion dollars, becoming the two giants amongfive sectors. The identical pattern happened with agricultural products and textiles. Beforereaching the equal level as agriculture products at 2016, textiles had been the inferior in thetotal yield at around 25 billion with agricultural products standing at above 30 billion. Gemand jewellery was the single field that the earning in 2015 was greater than in 2016 at 45 billion and 40 billion relatively. Four out of five categories saw positive growth with textiles being the king at 15. 24% followed by engineered goods at 8. 5%. petroleum and agricultural products were the two thatdid not surpass the 5% line with 3% for petroleum and 0. 81% for agriculture. Gem and jewellery was the odd one with negative growth with minor 5. 18% from 2015 to 2016.
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the comparison of percentage in
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, all fields witnessed a modest increase in the income
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exceptgems
and
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jewellery
. Despite starting at a lower point at below 60
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billion
dollars
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comparingwith
petroleum
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products
in 2015, engineered
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goods
have
marginally
risen to the
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sameplacement
as its counterpart at
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62
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billion
dollars, becoming the two giants
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amongfive
sectors. The identical pattern happened with agricultural
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products
and textiles.
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Beforereaching
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products
at 2016, textiles had been the inferior in
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thetotal
yield at around 25
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with agricultural
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standing at above 30
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billion
.
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Gemand
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jewellery
was the single field that the earning in 2015 was greater than in 2016 at 45
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and 40
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relatively
.

Four out of five categories
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growth with textiles being the king at 15. 24%

followed by engineered
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goods
at 8. 5%.
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petroleum
and agricultural
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were the two
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thatdid
not surpass the 5% line with 3% for petroleum and 0. 81% for agriculture. Gem and
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jewellery
was the odd one with
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growth with minor 5. 18% from 2015 to 2016.
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IELTS academic presents the national exports profit (in billions dollar) of varied sectors between2015 and 2016 while the table shows the comparison of percentage in different categoriesover the same period.

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