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The table compares the proportion of people by age ranges in a town who cycled in 2011.

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The table compares the proportion of people by age ranges in a town who cycled in 2011. There was a higher percentage of females who rode bicycles in all ages than males. Between 18 and 59, the figures for cyclists in both genders were lower than for other age groups. In age group between 0 and 9, the proportion of women who cycled more than men 1. Moreover, the ratio of females in age group between 10 and 17 more twice than males. There was a declining percentage of both gender who rode bicycles in 18-59 age groups. In females, the percentage went down from 17. 1 percent to 12. 3 percent. In males, the percentage went down from 9. 7 to 8. 0 percent. In age group 60+, the proportion of females who cycled more than males about 5. 3 percent.
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between 10 and 17 more twice than males.

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IELTS academic The table compares the proportion of people by age ranges in a town who cycled in 2011.

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