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Population growth in 3 countries

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The graph depicts the amount of population in 3 countries, namely China, Japan, and USA. This graph collects the data on those countries for 50 years (1950-2000)In 1950, China has the most population with around 590 million, compared to the other 2 countries. On the other hand, USA has the least amount of population with just around around 190 million people. Remarkably, the population in all 3 countries increased. China has the most significant increase in population, with approximately 1250 million people in 2000, although the country's population increase faltered slightly between 1960-1965. India saw a steady increase of its population from just below 400 million to a little above 1 billion in 2000. Astonishingly, USA's population growth is noticeably more languid than the other 2 countries, rising from 190 million in 1950 to 270 million in 2000.
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for 50 years (1950-2000)In 1950, China has the most
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with around 590
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, compared to the other 2
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in all 3
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increased. China has the most significant increase in
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, with approximately 1250
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in 2000, although the country's
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