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It is known that environmental problems are a world problem that people and govements have to solve, but who really have the power to make a great change?

It is known that environmental problems are a world problem that people and govements have to solve, but who really have the power to make a great change? Bwxya
It can be said that citizens' helps are necessary which could handle air pollution and the lack of water problem, . . . . In this essay, I will discuss on both aspects of the given issues and personally. First of all, environmental problems can not be solved easily. Those are really serious and intractable challenges that can not be solved in a short time. Only from our small actions such as throwing garbage around, using plastic bags, . . . have led to unpredictable consequences. For example, at present, in Vietnam, air pollution is a big problem. The smog from vehicles and exhaust from factories lead to polluted air that pervades cities. They are also the cause of the rapid increase in the number of people suffering from respiratory diseases. Gradually, environmental pollution becomes a problem beyond the control of normal people. The government and people need to work together to discuss a long-term strategy to solve the problem. Maybe to solve the problem, we have to act from the smallest things. Can environmental pollution be reduced or not? perhaps the answer is in the consciousness of each person. First, we should change our daily habits. People could use public transport such as buses, speed trains, electronic vehicles, . . . In addition, people can use cloth bags, reusable bags instead of using plastic bags when traveling. markets and supermarkets. The government should also introduce new laws to encourage people to take environmental protection more seriously. In conclusion, undoubtedly, effort from one side will give some optimistic results, however, that result would stay for a short period of time. But, the atmosphere issue is the longe term concern which requires to have almost complete results.
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helps
are necessary which could handle air
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pollution
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problem
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issues and
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,
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environmental
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problems
can not
be solved
easily
. Those are
really
serious and intractable challenges that can not
be solved
in a short time.
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from our
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small
actions such as throwing garbage around, using plastic
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bags
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, .
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.
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have
led to unpredictable consequences.
For example
, at present, in Vietnam, air
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pollution
is a
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big
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problem
. The smog from vehicles and exhaust from factories lead to polluted air that pervades cities. They are
also
the cause of the rapid increase in the number of
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people
suffering from respiratory diseases.
Gradually
,
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environmental
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pollution
becomes a
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problem
beyond the control of normal
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people
. The
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government
and
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people
need to work together to discuss a long-term strategy to solve the problem.

Maybe to solve the
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problem
, we
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have to
act from the smallest things. Can
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environmental
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pollution
be
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reduced
or not?
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perhaps
the answer is in the consciousness of each person.
First
, we should
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change
our daily habits.
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People
could
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use
public transport such as buses, speed trains, electronic vehicles
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, .
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In addition
,
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people
can
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cloth
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bags
, reusable
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bags
instead
of using plastic
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bags
when traveling.
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markets
and supermarkets. The
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government
should
also
introduce new laws to encourage
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people
to take
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environmental
protection more
seriously
.

In conclusion
,
undoubtedly
, effort from one side will give
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some
optimistic results,
however
, that result would stay for a short period of time.
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, the atmosphere issue is the
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term concern which requires to have almost complete results.
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IELTS academic It is known that environmental problems are a world problem that people and govements have to solve, but who really have the power to make a great change?

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