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Population and wealth shares by region

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The Par chart gives information about the population' and wealth's share rate by different countries. Overall, most of the countries have higher share than population share. Also, North America has the highest wealth share and Africa and India have the lowest. The highest population share is made by Chine, while the lowest share is done by Rich Asia-pacific. About one-third of wealth shared by North America, followed by Europe which shared for almost 30%. Less than one-quarter of shared is done by rich Asia-pacific. These countries represent the highest three countries which shared higher wealth than population. Latin America and Caribbean, Africa, China, India, and Other Asia-pacific shared lower wealth for about 4%, 1%, 2%, 1%, and 3% respectively. In contrast, more than 20% of population share, shared by China and it has the highest rate among all countries. Approximately 17% shares is done by other Asia-pacific. Europe and India have equale percentage of shares for almost 15%. North America, Latin America and Caribbean, Africa, and Rich Asia-Pacific have the lower share of population for about 6%, 8%, 10%, and 5% respectively.
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and Africa and India have the lowest. The highest
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by Rich Asia-pacific. About one-third of
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by North America, followed by Europe which
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for almost 30%. Less than one-quarter of
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by rich Asia-pacific. These
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. Latin America and Caribbean, Africa, China, India, and Other Asia-pacific
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for about 4%, 1%, 2%, 1%, and 3%
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by China and it has the highest rate among all
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