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Playground in India VS Canada

Playground in India VS Canada O6m7E

The playgrounds in India, they don't have one, we just used to play cricket in a big open field. The playgrounds in Canada I find much better than the playgrounds in India because they have a slide, a few swings, and monkey-bars etc. In India they have nothing really nothing. The India one was not bad, the cricket we used to play was enjoyable but not as enjoyable as the Canada park. I often go on the swings, I mean only on the swings. In Canada I have seen like three parks, I see two already in the on the way of the big playground I go in then the way of the third one, as you got to know is the third one. The first two ones were very small like a size of an eagle, the big park is the size of a zebra or lion.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpark
playgrounds
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just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play cricket in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 open field. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpark
playgrounds
 in Canada I find much better than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpark
playgrounds
 in India This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have a slide, a few swings, and monkey-bars etc. In The comma is probably missing here: "India, they".India, they
India they
 have nothing really
 nothing. The India one was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
, the cricket we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play was enjoyable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not as enjoyable as the Canada park. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go on the swings, I mean This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on the swings. In The comma is probably missing here: "Canada, I".Canada, I
Canada I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 like three parks, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 two already in the on the way of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpark
playground
 I go in then the way of the third one, as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to know is the third one. The first
 two ones were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 like a size of an eagle, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 park is the size of a zebra or lion. 