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The production of deep-fried salted peanuts

The production of deep-fried salted peanuts KVKBR

The given diagram illustrates the production of the deep-fried salted peanuts by a special company. Overall, that is a linear man-made process which consists of the 8 different stages, starting with the harvesting crops and finishing with its delivery to the shops and the small traders. First, the shells of the harvested peanuts are removed. After that, they are sent to the warehouse of the company in the 50 kg packages. Once they have arrived at the storage, the peanuts are put in the frying pans in order to fry them at the 190” for 5 minutes. Then the fried peanuts are scattered in a cooling tray so as to add the enough salt. In the final stage of the process, the dried peanuts are loaded into the packages which have distinct capacities. Having ended the packaging process, these are transported to the shops and the small vendors by trucks.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates the production of the deep-fried salted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroundnut
peanuts
 by a special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Overall
, that is
 a linear This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made process which consists of the 8 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages, starting with the harvesting crops and finishing with its delivery to the shops and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 traders.

First
, the shells of the harvested You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroundnut
peanuts
are removed
. After that, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the warehouse of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in the 50 kg packages. Once they have arrived at the storage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroundnut
peanuts
are put
 in the frying pans in order to fry them at the 190” for 5 minutes. Then the fried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroundnut
peanuts
are scattered
 in a cooling tray 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 salt.

In the final stage of the process, the dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroundnut
peanuts
are loaded
 into the packages which have distinct capacities. Having ended the packaging process, these are transported
 to the shops and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 vendors by trucks. 