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Pie charts of ways finding out the news

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The pie charts compare the first information resource, which dwellers are able to update the news in two different countries, Germany and Nigeria. Despite the resemble features of patterns in both nations, it is apparent to observer the differences about the fingures. As can be seen, in Nigeria the porportion of people watching Tv as the first place to get the news makes up roughly over three out of five, in other words it is more than double in Germary. Conversely, it is evident that reading the news in the print of Germans is preferred by three times, compared with Nigerians, namely 45% and 13%. One of the noticeable features of this data is that people consider listening radio as the first priority choice to find out the news in Nigeria is over twice in Germany. It is undeniable that Internet as well as other sources like friends and family are not favoured in both contries, specifically in Germany the ratio of population accessing the news online is 10% higher than in Nigeria, at 11% and the last figure is 4 % and 1% respectively. Overall, it can be said that Tv is considered as the most widespead methods in Nigeria, however, the most prominent place of the Germans to find out informations is in the newspapers.
The pie charts compare the
first
information resource, which dwellers are able to update the
news
in two
different
countries, Germany and Nigeria. Despite the resemble features of patterns in both nations, it is apparent to observer the differences about the
fingures
.

As can be
seen
, in Nigeria the
porportion
of
people
watching
Tv
as the
first
place to
get
the
news
makes
up roughly over three out of five,
in other words
it is more than double in
Germary
.
Conversely
, it is evident that reading the
news
in the print of Germans
is preferred
by three times, compared with Nigerians,
namely
45% and 13%. One of the noticeable features of this data is that
people
consider listening radio as the
first
priority choice to find out the
news
in Nigeria is over twice in Germany. It is undeniable that Internet
as well
as other sources like friends and family are not
favoured
in both
contries
,
specifically
in Germany the ratio of population accessing the
news
online is 10% higher than in Nigeria, at 11% and the last figure is 4 % and 1%
respectively
.

Overall
, it can
be said
that
Tv
is considered
as the most
widespead
methods in Nigeria,
however
, the most prominent place of the Germans to find out
informations
is in the newspapers.
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