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usage of water in industrial agriculture and domestic

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From, the given pie chart it can be clearly depicted that the percentage of water usage for industrialized use was huge in two community only, on the contrast the need of water was more on cultivation rather than mechanical in remaining regions, like. Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America. Over all, from the given pie chart water is essential in culture, mechanical and Domestic purposes. Let 's Discuss in detail according to the given ratio, North America and European region has 45 to 53% of water commitment for industrial, simultaneously 39% for culture and 32% domestic use. Moreover, Asia, Africa, South East Asia and at last South America these four countries are depended on cultivation consequently the consumption of water also more comparatively than modern and Domestic use. If we compare on a ratio basis, First is Asia as 885 followed by Africa was 84% then South East Asia was 81% and South America was 71%. Whereas, the demand of water for industrial and house hold demand was extremely less almost less than 10%, on the contrary a notable exception was South East Asia has 12% demand in companies. In conclusion, From the given countries the consumption of water was more ratio in Farming rather than Industrial and personal use.
From, the
given
pie chart it can be
clearly
depicted that the percentage of
water
usage for industrialized
use
was huge in two community
only
, on the contrast the need of
water
was more on cultivation
rather
than mechanical in remaining regions, like. Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America.

Over all, from the
given
pie chart
water
is essential in culture, mechanical and Domestic purposes.
Let
's Discuss in detail according to the
given
ratio, North America and European region has 45 to 53% of
water
commitment for industrial,
simultaneously
39% for culture and 32% domestic
use
.

Moreover
, Asia, Africa, South East Asia and at last South America these four countries
are depended
on cultivation
consequently
the consumption of
water
also
more
comparatively
than modern and Domestic
use
. If we compare on a ratio basis,
First
is Asia as 885 followed by Africa was 84% then South East Asia was 81% and South America was 71%.

Whereas, the demand of
water
for industrial and
house
hold demand was
extremely
less almost less than 10%,
on the contrary
a notable exception was South East Asia has 12% demand in
companies
.
In conclusion
, From the
given
countries the consumption of
water
was more ratio in Farming
rather
than Industrial and personal
use
.
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IELTS academic usage of water in industrial agriculture and domestic

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