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the given graph indicates the unemployment rate of women in four countries of the United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014

the given graph indicates the unemployment rate of women in four countries of the United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014 Kly5N

it is clearly seen from the graph in 2013 6. 8% women work jobless in England which was the highest unemployment rate among the given countries in wale female unemployment rate is 5. 4 % which was the shortest among these countries than 6. 1 % of women were unemployed in Scotland which was the shortest highest among the given countries after that 5. 6% women in Northern Ireland where one plus one year later the unemployment rate of human in England Wales and northern Ireland was decreased accept in Scotland in this year's Scotland Rose up the rate of unemployment moment and become that largest unemployment rate which indicated 6. 7 % on on the other hand England slipped from 6. 8% 26. 5 rate of unemployed women the rate in Wales lowered to 5 point

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