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Pie and bar chart show about water usage in Australia and residential areas in australia in 2004.

Pie and bar chart show about water usage in Australia and residential areas in australia in 2004. Wq2pb

Compares information of the proportion consuming water in Australia and residential process in the year of 2004 is illustrated by pie as well as bar graph. Overall, maximum consumption of water for houses followed by apartments and business, while for residential use; mainly water used in bathroom and garden. Begin with pie chart as 57% of total water usage for residential houses this was the highest percentage despite others sectors. A difference ranged between 11% and 10% was witnessed for industry and business, respectively. The least ratio for government and other sections that was 6% as well Solely 3%. After that utilising water for apartments, it was accounted for 13%. Probing further with bar graph, observing the largest water was used for bathroom snd and garden as approximately 28% for former and for later (26%). Kitchen consumed water in the lowest percentage only 10% and inclined by 5% in toilets. Last but not least, washing clothes; the figure was 20%.

Compares information of the proportion consuming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in Australia and residential process in the year of 2004 is illustrated
 by pie as well
 as bar graph.

Overall
, maximum consumption of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 followed by apartments and business, while for residential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
; mainly
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water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in bathroom and garden.

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Begin
 with pie chart as 57% of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 usage for residential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 this was the highest percentage despite others sectors. A difference ranged between 11% and 10% was witnessed
 for industry and business, respectively
. The least ratio for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 and other sections that was 6% as well
Solely
 3%. After that Possible spelling mistake. 'utilising' is British English.utilizing
utilising
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water
 for apartments, it was accounted
 for 13%.

Probing further
 with bar graph, observing the largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for bathroom Possible spelling mistake found.SNDandendsendsandSD
snd
 and garden as approximately 28% for former and for later (26%). Kitchen consumed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in the lowest percentage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 10% and inclined by 5% in toilets. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, washing clothes; the figure was 20%. 