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Percentage of young people in higher education

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The chart illustrates the proportion of youngsters engaged in higher studies in four distinct countries during three years 2000, 2005 and 2010. Overall, it can be observed that the highest number of young individual who were involved in higher education during all the three years were witnessed by country D, followed by country C. Country C observed a steady growth over the three years. Taking a closer look, the bar chart reveals that Country A experienced a high rise of 24% from 2000 to 2010. On the other hand, there was a marginal decrease of 3% in the education of Country C from 2000 to 2010 which accounted for 3%. In comparisons, there was a steady rise in the higher education of country D which increased from 64% to 80%( for the year 2000 to 2010 respectively). Country C doesn't experience change in 2005 and 2010 with staying on 52%.
The chart illustrates the proportion of youngsters engaged in higher studies in four distinct
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countries
during three years 2000, 2005 and 2010.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that the highest number of young individual who
were involved
in higher education during all the three years
were witnessed
by
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country
D, followed by
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country
C.
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Country
C observed a steady growth over the three years.

Taking a closer look, the bar chart reveals that
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Country
A experienced a high rise of 24% from 2000 to 2010.
On the other hand
, there was a marginal decrease of 3% in the education of
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Country
C from 2000 to 2010 which accounted for 3%.

In comparisons, there was a steady rise in the higher education of
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country
D which increased from 64% to 80%
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for the year 2000 to 2010
respectively
).
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C doesn't experience
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in 2005 and 2010 with staying on 52%.
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