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Percentage of water which used in six areas

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The provided pie charts depict the proportion of water which consumed in six different continents for various aims in whole world. Overall, At a swift gaze, it is noticeable that, Africa and Central Asia utilised biggest proportion of water in cultivation and domestic use was common in everywhere. Moving to the details, North America utilised 48% water for Industrial use. It was used roughly to two quarters for Agriculture and daily use very less rather than two others. South America was utilising highest amount of water for cultivation use it was near to one third. Routine use was19% and industrial use nine percent less than industrial. Moreover, Europe was utilising more than half water for producing product and roughly to one and half quarters for grown crops. Houseing uses was common in Europe. Turning to the detail, Africa was utilised huge proportion of water for crops cultivation. Industrial and domestic use of water almost same in Africa. Central Asia was used greatest amount of water for cultivation use with 88%. Cultivation and routine utilising was very least as comparison to crops. South East Asia was consumed higher quantity of water for growing crops. Domestic and Industrial utilising was 7% and 12% respectively.
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in
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was common in everywhere.

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, North America
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48%
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Industrial
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. It was
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roughly to two quarters for Agriculture and daily
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it was near to one third. Routine
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was19% and
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industrial
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nine percent less than
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more than half
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for producing product and roughly to one and half quarters for grown
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was common in Europe.

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huge proportion of
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almost same in Africa. Central Asia was
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with 88%.
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for growing
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IELTS academic Percentage of water which used in six areas

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