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Percentage of water use in agriculture,industrial and domestic use in six different countries.

Percentage of water use in agriculture, industrial and domestic use in six different countries. 73qxX
The pie chart depicts the percentage of water utilisation in agricultural, industrial and domestic sectors in six different regions of the world, North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia. Overall, water usage is highest in agricultural field in all regions except in North America and Europe where it is used more for industrial purposes. The least being for domestic use. The percentage for agricultural use is roughly around 85% in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. This is followed by South America which is 71% whereas for North America and Europe the figures decline to about half 39% and 32% respectively.
The pie chart depicts the percentage of water
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utilisation
in agricultural, industrial and domestic sectors in six
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different
regions of the world, North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia.

Overall
, water usage is highest in agricultural field in all regions except in North America and Europe where it is
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used
more for industrial purposes. The least being for domestic
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use
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The percentage for agricultural
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use
is roughly around 85% in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. This
is followed
by South America which is 71% whereas for North America and Europe the figures decline to about half 39% and 32%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Percentage of water use in agriculture, industrial and domestic use in six different countries.

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