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The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. 33gX

The picture illustrates how the aluminium cans are recycled. First the used cans are collected in the collection centres because people sort out the garbage and always take the cans to the collection centres. The cans are delivered from collection centres to the factory by special truck. After delivery the cans are sorted and cleaned thoroughly. Subsequently they are shredded and compressed. Thirdly the cans are put into the special hot oven and melted in a high temperature. After this step the cans are rolled between 2, 5 and 6mm thickness depending on what on the usage. After this the rolling is used for making containers such as cokes or colas. Finally the cans are sold to the factories and people. In the UK 74% of the aluminium cans are recycled.

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cans
are recycled
.

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cans
are collected
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people
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.

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cans
are delivered
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 to the factory by special truck. After delivery the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are sorted
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Subsequently
 they are shredded
 and compressed.

Thirdly
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cans
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cans
are rolled
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6mm
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used
 for making containers such as cokes or colas.

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Finally
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cans
are sold
 to the factories and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. In the UK 74% of the Possible spelling mistake. 'aluminium' is British English.aluminum
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cans
are recycled
. 