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"Parents are the best teachers." DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT? SUPPORT YOUR OPINION BY USING SPECIFIC REASONS AND DETAILS.

"Parents are the best teachers. " SUPPORT YOUR OPINION BY USING SPECIFIC REASONS AND DETAILS. GLl2o
Although teachers from classes provide us a tremendous amount of knowledge, it is undeniable that parents are the best teachers for three reasons. First of all, they are the first one who teach their children how to become a person. They teach us how to talk, eat, drink, walk and many basic things to live. Secondly, there aren't any teachers more devoted than our parents. Generally, teachers teach us because of their responsibility but our parents teach us as we are our love. It may take other teachers some months or some years to educate us but our parents spend their whole life making efforts to help us to be the best in the world. Last but not least, our parents know much about us more than any teachers. So our parents can assist us in addressing troublesome problems which teachers can't understand. To sum up, without a doubt, parents are the best teachers.
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from classes provide us a tremendous amount of knowledge, it is undeniable that
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are the best
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for three reasons.
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their children how to become a person. They
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us how to talk, eat, drink, walk and
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more devoted than our
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us
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us as we are our
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years to educate us
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spend their whole life making efforts to
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us to be the best in the world. Last
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not least, our
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know much about us more than any
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.
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So
our
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can assist us in addressing troublesome problems which
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can't understand. To sum up, without a doubt,
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are the best
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.

IELTS academic "Parents are the best teachers. " SUPPORT YOUR OPINION BY USING SPECIFIC REASONS AND DETAILS.

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154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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