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Overall, it is an eight stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from

Overall, it is an eight stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from DqoB6
Overall, it is an eight stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting sugar canes from its plants and culminating with delivering ready-made to supermarkets, by using sugar canes and related equipment and tools. First of all, sugarcanes growing in tropical regions are harvested from the plants. Secondly, a juice is collected by crushing harvested sugarcanes using milling, and from this, in order to collect raw sugar, those collected juice is filtered; then, the raw sugar is shipped to Germany. Subsequently, in the Germany, the raw sugar is purified in ways of melting and filtering. After that, the sugar syrup is taken out from melted and filtered sugar syrup. In the next stage, it is crystalized before sugar crystals are dried. Now that, the sugars are packaged to be delivered to supermarkets and restaurants.
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, it is an eight stage,
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-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting
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sugar
canes from its plants and culminating with delivering ready-made to supermarkets, by using
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sugar
canes and related equipment and tools.

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First of all
,
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sugarcanes
growing in tropical regions
are harvested
from the plants.
Secondly
, a juice
is collected
by crushing harvested
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sugarcanes
using milling, and from this, in order to collect raw
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sugar
, those collected juice
is filtered
; then, the raw
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sugar
is shipped
to Germany.

Subsequently
, in the Germany, the raw
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sugar
is purified
in ways of melting and filtering. After that, the
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sugar
syrup
is taken
out from melted and filtered
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sugar
syrup. In the
next
stage, it is
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crystalized
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before
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sugar
crystals
are dried
.
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Now
that, the
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sugars
are packaged
to
be delivered
to supermarkets and restaurants.
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IELTS academic Overall, it is an eight stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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