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Oral it can be seen that the sodium was the most preferred nutrient in dinner and the less favourite in the breakfast and the snake.

Oral it can be seen that the sodium was the most preferred nutrient in dinner and the less favourite in the breakfast and the snake. pJQjD
The three-bar graphs compare the three common nutrients sodium saturated fat and added sugar were consumed by an average of netizens in their daily routine in the USA. Overall, it can be seen that sodium was the most preferred nutrient in dinner and the less favourite in the breakfast and snacks. Having a clean glance, the consumption of sodium remained the highest in dinner, which was 43 % whereas it was less like in breakfast and snacks. It made up 14% percentage for both. With regards to saturated fat, was mostly ate at dinner, slightly less than two-fifths. the proportion of the saturated food and added sugar had a similarity and both were Intake 60 % in the breakfast. over a quarter of people prefered to eat saturated fat in lunch. By analysing another data, the amount of added sugar was less consumed by the people in every male. In the snake and dinner time, people prefer the most 42 percentage and 23 percentage respectively and less favourite in the breakfast.
The three-bar graphs compare the three common
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sodium
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saturated
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fat
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added
sugar
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by an average of netizens in their daily routine in the USA.

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that sodium was the most preferred nutrient in
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dinner
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and snacks.

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dinner
, which was 43 % whereas it was
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like in
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and snacks. It made up 14% percentage for both.
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,
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food and
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sugar had a similarity and both were Intake 60 % in the
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in lunch.

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another data, the amount of
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sugar was
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consumed by the
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people
in every male. In the snake and
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time,
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people
prefer the most 42 percentage and 23 percentage
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IELTS academic Oral it can be seen that the sodium was the most preferred nutrient in dinner and the less favourite in the breakfast and the snake.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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