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The provided bar graph gives information about the media sources that citizens from all age groups in a particular nation preferred to attain information in 2011.

The provided bar graph gives information about the media sources that citizens from all age groups in a particular nation preferred to attain information in 2011. 7LVG3
The provided bar graph gives information about the media sources that citizens from all age groups in a particular nation preferred to attain information in 2011. Generally, radio seemed to be the most-liked resource of media for distinct age groups, apart from the teenage group. Meanwhile, micro blogging was witnessed to be the least-admired category of media to all residents during the given period. Starting from the radio type, only 40% of teenage citizens were claimed to choose it. Nonetheless, in the middle age groups of 18 to 64, over 90% of people were surveyed to be known that they loved radio among other kinds of media. This figure, however, declined slightly to 88% in the group of over 65 years old. In the same year, people who were between 10 and 29 years of age showed the similar interest in social networks of 80% precisely. On the other hand, this interest in social networks gradually sank in the remaining age groups, at 10% of the elderly. The percentage of people who were keen on micro blogging was the lowest, which also varied from 20% of the teenagers to nearly 5% of the oldest group.
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in a particular nation preferred to attain information in 2011.

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media
for distinct
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age
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. Meanwhile, micro blogging
was witnessed
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to all residents during the
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age
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of 18 to 64, over 90% of
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people
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that they
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however
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of over 65 years
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age
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showed
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gradually
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, at 10% of the elderly. The percentage of
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people
who were keen on micro blogging was the lowest, which
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IELTS academic The provided bar graph gives information about the media sources that citizens from all age groups in a particular nation preferred to attain information in 2011.

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