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Maps of shopping mall in its present form and its future devleopment

Maps of shopping mall in its present form and its future devleopment rV6k

The maps illustrates Southside, a shopping mall, in its present form and plans for the future changes. Overall, the major changes might happen around the east side of the mall where the green area and the golf course is planned to be demolished to make more room for the expansion of the mall. Outside of the shopping mall, the fitness centre will be demolished for the purposes of the expansion of the car park. The areas on the east side of the mall will be gone and be used to expand the centre. Currently, Southside only has one entrance and there is a cafe just infront of the entrance. However, this will change as the info centre will replace the cafe and another entrance will be built for the department store which will be more spacious in the future. Furthermore, most of the stores inside will be changed and only the supermarket, toilet and department store will stay in the future design of the mall. The area for entertainment and eating such as cinemas, noodle shop and play area will changed to become an area for beauty and fashion. The area will have an array of stores such as Beauty salon, shoe, cosmetics, shoe, and gift store.

The maps You should probably use "illustrate".illustrate
illustrates
 Southside, a shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
, in its present form and plans for the future This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Overall
, the major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 might happen around the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 where the green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and the golf course is planned
 to be demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 more room for the expansion of the mall.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "Outside".Outside
Outside of
 the shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
, the fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 will be demolished
 for the purposes of the expansion of the car park. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 on the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 will be gone
 and be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to expand the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
.

Currently
, Southside This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 has one entrance and there is a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Possible spelling mistake found.in front
infront
 of the entrance. However
, this will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 as the info Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 will replace the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and another entrance will be built
 for the department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 which will be more spacious in the future.

Furthermore
, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 inside will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the supermarket, toilet and department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 will stay in the future design of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for entertainment and eating such as cinemas, noodle shop and play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "change"change
changed
 to become an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for beauty and fashion. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 will have an array of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 such as Beauty salon, shoe, cosmetics, shoe, and gift You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
. 