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Number of common dolphins seen in Santa Barbara Channel from 1996-2001.

Number of common dolphins seen in Santa Barbara Channel from 1996-2001. 75gmn

The line graph compares the proportion of common dolphins live in Santa Barbara Channel between 1996 and 2001. It is clear that, the rate of individuals was unstable over the period. The trend showed a noticeable raise in the three years 1996, 1998 and in the end of the period. Based on the statistics, dolphins stood at approximately 1500 in 1996. Over the next year, the figure of dolphins individuals increased significantly to about 7200. In contrast 1998, this trend dropped dramatically to just above 4000, but afretwards there was a substantial went up of about 1700. However, the proportion of dolphins had again a drastic fell almost the same number by nearly 1500. At the end of the period, this number also peaked at roughly 7200 and showed an equal number of dolphins individual. Compared to the beginning, in the end had a higher rate of individuals, within around 5700.

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 a noticeable raise in the three years 1996, 1998 and in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the period.

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. Compared to the beginning, in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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