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Nowadays, the gap between parents and children is growing wider and wider. What was the cause? What are the solutions?

Nowadays, the gap between parents and children is growing wider and wider. What was the cause? What are the solutions? aloxP
In this modern world, adults as well os children are also getting very busy with their works. As an effect, the gap between parents and children is growing wider and wider. The essay about the causes and some solution to this problem. To begin with, people are very busy with their own works and don't find any family time. And also in case of children, they also get too much work load from the school to finish. To cite an example, if a father is coming back. to home lately every day and go for work morning it will surely make a big gap between his children and him. One of the other reason is the intense use of digital technology by family members. This will also make a gap between family members. For instance, while a family function or meeting, if he or she is addicted to social media life, they won't be attentive in that function and don't over know what's going around him or her. However, every problems have solutions. Some of the solutions can be, every family should spend time for themself atleast ones a week or have a joyful picnic with family members. This will strengthen the bond between family members. Family members should help each other in free time like helping mother in kitchen or doing works in garden. And also there should be a strict restriction of digital platforms during family time. This gain more attention towards each other. In conclusion, in my sight of view, the main anti-hero in this problem is digital life style because people spent there meantime in this. But also there are many other cases too. And the one perfect solution is to have a mutual understanding between the family member and make time to spend with family.
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is growing wider and wider. The essay about the causes and
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function or meeting, if he or she
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like helping mother in kitchen or doing works in garden. And
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. This gain more attention towards each other.

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is to have a mutual understanding between the
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make
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IELTS academic Nowadays, the gap between parents and children is growing wider and wider. What was the cause? What are the solutions?

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