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The table below shows consumer preferences for the features of automatic washing machines in the different

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The given table represents the information about the features of the automatic washing machines that choices of individuals in the different nations; United Kingdom, Germany France and Sweden. Looking from an Overall prespective, it is readily apparent that the the consumers of Germany and Sweden prefer to similar characteristics of the auto washing machine. Moreover, Germany france, Sweden have identical features expect the United Kingdom. Looking the bar chart in more detail, the washing machine height is 34 and the Shell is Narrow in the United Kingdom and France. Afterthat, the materali(Eneml)and capacity5(kilo) is similar in both nations. Onward, Water heating system is present in France whilst it is absent in the United Kingdom. Thereafter, the physical look of washing machine is vary in all Nations. washing action also follow the same pattern as to the draw materials. In the Germany and Sweden most people pickup the wide and shell is 34 and wide. However, the material and washing action is a identical. In addition, the appearance of the Germany machine is Indestructible Whilst it os strong in Sweden. the speed of the machine is more than Sweden at just 50rpm.
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machine
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france
, Sweden have identical features
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Kingdom. Looking the bar chart in more detail, the washing
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height is 34 and the Shell is Narrow in the
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United
Kingdom and France.
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)and capacity5(kilo) is similar in both nations. Onward, Water heating system is present in France whilst it is absent in the
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United
Kingdom. Thereafter, the physical look of washing
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machine
is vary in all Nations.
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washing
action
also
follow the same pattern as to the draw materials. In the Germany and Sweden most
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people
pickup the wide and shell is 34 and wide.
However
, the material and washing action is
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it os
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the
speed of the
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IELTS academic The table below shows consumer preferences for the features of automatic washing machines in the different

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